Jaime at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

13/06/2008

Eskimo Dancing.

I found a poem in Space #3 by Adrian from Marshall, Alaska.

I like the poem “Eskimo Dancing” cause I like watching people dance.

One sentence that stand out for me is the sentence that says “nice and delightful smile.” It stands out for me because it remind me of how my mom smiles.

Another sentence that I did was “Great Drumming”. It stood out for me because it remind me of the great way that I drum.

I look forward to seeing what Adrian makes next, because I think his writing and his poem are very interesting that is what will bring me back to read his writing.